From this crit I found that there were some things which needed improving before the deadline, one thing which needed changing was that there were several spelling mistakes, I will be able to change them before the dealing and that it was missing day 1-5 which was a printing error. Another thing which came up was the colour scheme and pattern. People said they liked the patterns but thought they could have been relevant to the dish being explained. people also thought that the colour scheme was slightly feminine, so if I were to do it again I would change the colours to more neutral colours so that the Calendar/Meal plan would cater for both male and female.
One of the things which was pointed out was spelling mistakes in the introduction about how to use the calendar, here is what it looked like before and after the changes were made.
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